All alone, aside, aground, bays an empty soul - nameless,
Afloat, adrift, awash, says an empty ghoul - shameless!
In thoughts - I am lost, tattles an empty vessel - aimless,
I am with me yet all alone, rattles an empty skull - rudderless!
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This poem is to amazing to describe with words! every line was extensively amazing! I couldn't even pick one to Put in this comment! Truly you are a great poet!
It's an amazing poem, , , ! ! Loner is a mourner! ! it's a rare piece of poetry about loner, , , (((Alone I flew in ruefulness, I, Ruta graveolens)) ..I like this line... I amazed seeing the excellent structure of lines of this poem, , , great work dear poet.. Top marks! ! !
'All alone, aside, aground, bays an empty soul – nameless, Afloat, adrift, awash, says an empty ghoul – shameless! In thoughts - I am lost, tattles an empty vessel – aimless, I am with me yet again all alone rattles an empty skull – rudderless! ' An empty soul, an empty ghoul, a empty vessel and an empty skull, What a vivid presentation of the loneliness. Oh my god! I never come across such a poem on loneliness. Hey poet you it is new trend from you. I like it by heart, by soul and every other way! Simply fantabulous work by you....................
am an apple pale with no charm, landing alone, I am a sullen moon in a galaxy of stars, standing alone, Those are ethereal lines...one of your best writes to read undoubtedly
don`t worry about future, everything will be ok. your poem is a massage from your soul to all people. it has truth and sadness, but it is beautiful in its composition, style of writing and, of course, rhyme. i like it))))
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Thank you for a wonderful review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍