Dimitri's Soul Comments
I saw my soul on one occasion.
It occurred early on a late summer
day, when the foliage makes its sincerest
efforts to appear green and healthy.
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Amazing. Extraordinary. meaningful. Lovely poem. I'm spellbound reading the poem. Thanks to share this master poem.
Early on a late summer we experience many features of warmness and as such we feel the cycle of season well because after summer rainy season comes. In such occurrence this is amazing to see soul in special occasion and feel self. Coming to rest on a figure clothed in yellow light shines with imagery portrayed with experiences of dozens of past years. Completing journey of life I again see soul. What an interesting and marvellous work really shared here that pleases mind. Excellent composition....10
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8/4/2025 12:41:12 AM # 1.0.0
In a swift moment we live without cares and then in a swift moment we are gone. But here is a vision of life wasted in loneliness that kept vodka as company. The vision of Holy Mother.s warning woke Dimitri. He repented. What a beautiful allusion and it is very stiring! Thank you..
You captured the whole meaning of the poem in your first sentence and it clarifies to me what I accomplished in writing it. Thanks for the bright insight.