Sunday, August 7, 2011

Dimensions No One Knows Comments

Rating: 5.0

</>The last rays of sunlight stark
Flutter in omniscience,
Both light and dark
What here, at end of day,
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Smoky Hoss
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Tsira Gogeshvili 16 October 2011

Well written.... I too hope that the Sun will be soon come back around us...10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Craig Anderson 05 September 2011

Such a wonderful description of our beloved sun. Yet we do take her for granted. I'm a spiritual person not so much religious but silently thank her for her return every night. Excellent way you have penned this. Regards. Craig

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Juan Olivarez 18 August 2011

Such beauty in so few words, Smoky it's a wonderful poem, for some reason, and I really don't know why, It reminds me of a poem I wrote several months back called, The Ancient Ones.They are nothing alike yet there is that tiny thread, oh well. Another ten Smokey.

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