Dimensions Comments

I love the 3rd stanza so much! stunning poem

A great work, Ali. Life is loved and lived no matter the obstacles that may arise. There are few challenges yet many experiences! An absolutely great verse.

Wow- - absolutely lovely poem- - - - -You, a true lover of life- -To quote a few lines- - - - I become pale leaving my tree falling to ground I love my life - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am the junction between day and night your coffee time will be here tommorow may you live millions evenings I love the Life! - - - - - - - - - -To my poem list.

Ah-ha! ! ! A poem that I have not yet read! ! ! My dear friend, please write more poems- they are eagerly awaited! I am a reader of your poems- -and I love my life! ! I must post while I can- this page is flipping back and forth

A beautiful write. Life is not always kind. It does not last but love life as long as you live and give happiness to others. Great thoughts expressed beautifully.

A thought poem, we are born to die, let us spread as much color and aroma as much we can, and add some color to the garden in that we were born.

Though my existence is as transitory as a flower or the script on the waves, I don't mind and I love my life as long as I can give a little joy to others! A poem with profound thoughts! !

There is great postiveness and spirit of life With beautiful images And senese important for new year and new life to start Happy new year ali

It seems on behalf of a flower. A talkin flower is a brilliant poetic idea! Wah.

It seems on behalf of a flower. A talkin flower is a brilliant poetic idea! Wah.

I am the script on the layers what the waves trying to convey till I splash on the brink I love my life.... a poem with substance in the lines! ! ! ! ! !

May you live long. I keep moving close. I wish to live long seeing you all along. Beautiful poem expressing love. Thank you.

A vivid and beautiful poem. Your emotions spill through right to the very end. Great work! 10 Karin Anderson

I am the script on the layers what the waves trying to convey till I splash on the brink I love my life............. This sums up the poem. A good depth. A good message.

Your use of dimensions is so cool!

we have different dimensions to our nature.our life is short, but, all the same, we all love it.your philosophy touches me.10+

'I am the script on the layers what the waves trying to convey till I splash on the brink I love my life' - these are lines with unique impact. Adore the general feel created by this poem, I agree with Faiz, here is a very sensitive and subtle craft.Keep on! Best wishes. A.

Ali u write so gud, three S for u, Sensitive, Subjective and Subtle. You have mentioned those thender gestures and feelings which people usually miss, just keep it up :)

Enchanting and beautiful The lines are enjoyable to read Full of realisation.. 10. Regards, MIMI

life and its dimensions, no matter what we cling on to it..we face it. nice poem