Thursday, May 1, 2008

Dilettatish Hunger Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sitting in my porch lounger
I satiate my dilettantish hunger
with nocturnal devour
of succulent silence!
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Sathya Narayana
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Denis Mair 21 May 2016

Looking through a few of your poems, I find inimitable lines and phrases never heard before. You strike a self-deprecatory note as to your DILLITANTISH HUNGER, admitting that such ponderings are hardly profound. Yet this is your time for a NOCTURNAL DEVOUR/ OF SUCCULENT SILENCE. I am envious of your ruminations. In your BLISSFUL MOPE you do indeed go deep, speaking of the MAGICAL CADUCEUS that renders the creation, truly a CONOISSEUR'S CONUNDRUM. From that conundrum you have teased out deep-running threads. The bi-helical snakes of the caduceus represent an amazing intuition about the stuff of life. The living world was generated by magical bi-helical threads running through it! I think dilettantish hunger is the best kind. The night's conundrums cannot be pondered by a specialized professional.

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Bob Blackwell 08 November 2008

The glory of our night sky well pictured with your delightful words. Bob

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Reshma Ramesh 18 September 2008

haha! ! nice one.......made me smile

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Seema Chowdhury 09 September 2008

another thought provoking poem i must compliment. God is great who has made this world for us....

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Indira Babbellapati 30 July 2008

hey, but tell me, wht makes u think god is he?

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Rema Prasanna 24 July 2008

this has got substance when you look through his boundless spectacle you find a tangled puzzle..excellent poetic dictions.. a very fine work from you...10++ Rema

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Indira Renganathan 24 July 2008

You excel with shining terms.Well written. Congrats

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 July 2008

This was a well done piece of prose. I thought it flowed well as prose normally doesn't. That is why I gave it my normal top grade. GW62

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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