Looking at the vast horizon
I whipped and wonder where to depart
My move could hurt some citizens
But I had no intention to disregard
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I like your poetry style, blocks of words showing you have emotion. And you have a richness and diversity to your writing. Instead of all this lazy emotional languange why not see if you can write something which shows you can think more rationally creating something intricate and finely crafted and precise in expression? Contemplation is for lazy souls, concentrate, stop dreaming. All the best.
yusof-I agree with Melvin, and your poem has emotion and immediacy. Good work! Katherine
Great poem brother. Fun to read. Well, journalist really face great delimna, not just to inform but to challenge, not just to write but to transform change... not just to share wisdom but to start a fire that will cause trouble in their desire to bring changes, reform for injustices, curruption and any issued that needs one's concern. thanks for sharing, best wishes, melvin
I really like this poem as you really have explained yourself so well through your words.
leadership....violence...all are happening mowadays...ths s nice..