Monday, May 29, 2006

Dilemma Comments

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Here, in my little box,
I feel I am too big.

But, if I were to see the world,
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Sophia White
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Tara Teeling 02 June 2006

This is wonderful, Sophia. What you've written about what so many of us experience during our youth. Some feel as though they've learned everything they can where they are and tire of their surroundings. Of course, the thought of jumping into a bigger 'pond' is more daunting, terrifying perhaps. The result is that many of us end up treading water, drowning in boredom. This poem, though simple and short, does not lack in power or meaning. Nicely done.

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