Friday, June 28, 2013

Dilemma Comments

Rating: 4.7

Memories of yours gnawing my mind..
Holds my heart & dispersed on ground..
Everyday this dread, I don’t want to rewind..
But you & your belongings,
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Farah Ilyas
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

very nice poem full of emotion i love the way you write it thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 11 July 2013

You out-poured your heart.

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Payal Parande 03 July 2013

fine to the core you almost made me cry....speechless

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2013

a deep emotional poem. lovely

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R.j. Wynn 02 July 2013

Honey, I'm back and I love your poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 July 2013

When heart fells soothe and calm let the poet in you bring us good poems

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Yasmin Khan 01 July 2013

Emotional and with feelings so deep and your write expresses such a wild yearning, very passionate write.

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Soumita Sarkar 30 June 2013

Liked the feel........the stranded soul in guise of blessing............keep writing.

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Vishal Sharma 30 June 2013

a beautiful poem same as your mind is so beautiful i love all the words that escape your pen a master vizard of poetry you are...I, nothing else god bless you.

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Sallam Yassin 30 June 2013

you departed but still in my heart and life became my waiting interval for u to return to me my life and my life is you; Oh my heart/ piece of gem Farah bravo

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2013

This dilemma will soon be overcome by you... A good sharing indeed...

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David Wood 29 June 2013

A delightful poem, soft and gentle like a summer breeze.

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2013

Really a beautiful write Farah, you should play around the emotion so you always can understand the words that they have, secretly hidden in them, then use it to lies in your lines...and it will be nicely written then..Great write_Soul

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Dave Walker 28 June 2013

A great poem, like it. A great write.

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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