Dilemma Comments

An advice, don't lose her! ! ! The love is insane, has no way to control it! ! ! Pray, cry, suffer but if not you'll be alone! ! Beautiful! ! ! !

the last two lines are amazing..... its like a quarrel b/w hope and despair. and being poet you r at the other end................ to be or not to be?

A dilemma indeed! So hard to wish someone that you love happiness elsewhere, when all you want is their love in return. I like how you pit your love and hers against each other in the beginning of your poem.

superb.... A real dilemma... Dear, U always play upon ur words like a juggler... Really something that fastens the readers to read till end... The flow is nice... A touching line, Requested me to pray for you a loyal mate. Really daring... Another chissled piece of poetry from U