Monday, October 16, 2006

Dilemma Comments

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As I sit here in the night
I am now compelled to write
Something brilliant, something bright
But I want to get it right
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007

Good rhyming exercise Linda, and it did turn out to be very shiny, very bright and very light! ! xx

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Asma Bahrainwala 16 October 2006

nice rhymes here... good job, linda.. asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 October 2006

BOOO! HISSS! LISTEN, WE WANT A VERSE , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , FROM MIDNIGHT THE NURSE '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''IF WE DON'T GET ONE SOON ////////////////////////////WE'LL STEAL HER FORK'N SPOON!

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Preeti - is here! 16 October 2006

You made a wonderful rhyme, very enjoyable poem :) Preets

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Linda Ori

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