' Dilemma ' Comments
i feel the emptiness in me.
when it will last i m unaware of it
if it's the lifelong feeling..or just an illusion pertaining to be reality
i can't say anything about it
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Shiza is taking an early flight from innocence- awesome
the whole poem is very good with deep thoughts but i lked the las line most, keep writing thank... i will find u in some way..or maybe you'll get to me sooner.. i'll wait for u till then...because i know u exist...and you'll be the reason for my existence.! ....a very touching write indeed
nice... keep on like this or maybe a bit better and you'll do great :)
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7/22/2025 6:44:52 AM # 1.0.0
A refined poetic imagination, Shiza. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.