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Complete your work with full attention,
Never try to give it an extension;
Because some says life gives you a second chance,
While other believes it happens only once.
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Inspiring write Sourav. Beautiful flow of words giving us motivation. Congratulations on member poem of the day!
The rhyming feels somewhat forced. I think 'free-verse' is sometimes preferable since it imposes no constraints and leaves the poet free to prioritize feelings, emotions and ideas, over formalistic concerns.
Being yourself see your limitations to grow, And learn to deal with dark to make yourself glow. Wise words of hope and encouragement. Congratulations Saurav!
Don't resist your mind to your limited view, Let your imaginations and thoughts to be the new; Being yourself see your limitations to grow, And learn to deal with dark to make yourself glow. - - - - Our dark and negative thoughts restrict our mind from growing.A very inspiring poem to get over our fear and dark thoughts.
And learn to deal with dark to make yourself glow. A very nice inspiring poem for the beginner of life. You could have rendered a better poem with the same theme if you were not conscious of the rhyming factors.
Learn to deal with dark to make yourself glow ...very inspiring... Thanx
The fault within! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
a wonderful positive and inspiring poem that gives sound advice? ..............well written SK
Such an inspiring poem, Sourav... congrats for being chosen... a perfect 10++++
This is a didatic poem not only to teenagers but als to all ages that life has many challanges and we have to face having right decision discriminating right and wrong. We must do our today's work with full attention and we mustn't keep it for tomorrow. Beautiful poem with lofty insights. Thank u dear Sourav and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Thanks for the appreciation sir, being a teenager I know what goes in a mind of a teenager I have just tried to give words to my feelings. Thanks a lot for your support
Sourav, your poem of hope and optimism should be a must-read for all teenagers. You've done an excellent job of conveying the doubting and scary world of the teenager. And that at the end of the dark tunnel, there is always light. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Thank you a lot, I hope my poem some how can make the teenagers to overcome their doubtful thoughts a and fear
A sublime start with a nice poem, Sourav. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
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7/28/2025 9:46:28 AM # 1.0.0
congrats on being poet of the day. The poem, however, needs additional polishing...