Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Dil Bujha Rahta Hai Muflis Ke Charagon Ki Tarah! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gham ke maaroN ki andheron men basar hoti hai
Sham.e gham ki bhi kahin koii sahar hoti hai

Usko bhi gham ki tarah dil men hi dafnate haiN
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2022

Excellent. I don't know why are aloof. Please keep penning. For this poem 5 stars.

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Abduhoo Salamath 14 August 2016

ashk ho jate haiN tareek shaboN meN raushan Inhee ashkoN ke sahare tou basar hoti hai Ik musafir bhi agar saye se mehroom rahe Ai shajar! ismeN bhi tauheen-e shajar hoti hai... wah, ..waah, ...wah, ..waaah..kia kehney hain...aisa lagta hai shairee aap ka takia kalam hai...

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 February 2016

Kahin koii sahar! The sun is always there waiting for you; to give you hope when you are down. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2016

Wah wah.. Kya umda ghazal hai..Masha-Allah...Aapka anda-e-bayaaN kuch nirala hai.....10+++ Ik musafir bhi agar saye se mehroom rahe Ai shajar! ismeN bhi tauheen-e shajar hoti hai Kis ne kub kaise guzaree haiN shabeN ro ro kar Aarzoo iski kahaN unko Khabar hoti hai

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Akhtar Jawad 21 January 2016

Khoobsoorat khyalat, mutasirkun Kalam, auor dilkash andaz-e-beyan.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 January 2016

Beautiful, beautiful...once again something I can relate to. The overpowering feeling of pain and loneliness flows through this poem and leaves the reader completely struck by its force and emotion. Great write.10 of course.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 January 2016

omniscient God knows everything.. good love..

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