Where thoughts are defiled with
Anger, greed, violence and pride;
Where mind revolts against the truth
And carries the lies as its guide;
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Where heart follows words of sinners Where men cease to act as healers; Where actions push lives into woes Where river of wisdom never flows; To that world O God please do not show me the way. a fine poem. tony
Help me Lord to stay as a stone under your feet... I enjoyed this.
Beautiful poem. So filled with cries of a passionate heart devoted to love and goodness. Loved the rhythm and the flow and specially the last few lines. Thanks for sharing.
Wow... the rarest piece of art... v nice depiction of values Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem
A well versed n atriculated poem lace with steady rhyme and rhythm. Thanks 4 sharin this great poem
humble, gentle, modest, meek…..all features of life here delineated superbly at last the surrendering to the almighty also the great expression of human character /// beautiful poem
To that world, O God, don't show me the way Help me; as a stone, under your feet let me stay..... yes, we do pray this way feeling disgusted very much when we find ill minded people around us......better to be a stone under His feet....superb poem 10++++
Thanks for giving your valuable time and wonderful review. My regards.
Where heart does not care to repent For the deeds unlawfully done; dignity comes from our ability to love and care innocently dignity is a virtuous life of serentiy.. thank u dear poet for your sublime thoughts. tony
Feeling great getting an awesome comment a great poet. Heartfelt gratitude Sir.
Where heart does not care to repent For the deeds unlawfully done; Where from the hearts of people Feelings of love and kinship are gone....Precious words, a fabulous poem!
An awesome poem each line beautifully written, interesting food for thought. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing!
An impartial study and evaluation of degeneration afflicting our society today. Thanks. Where thoughts are defiled with Anger, greed, violence and pride; Where river of wisdom never flows;
I found the verses intriguing, and was not able to guess where you were going with this. Good ending - and it came as a good surprise =: -)
Where heart does not care to repent For the deeds unlawfully done.. i like it!
A very good sonnet. you use repetition 'where' very effectively. There is a moral in the poem.
Beautiful poem about staying on a righteous path and maintaining's one's self-respect. Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful stanzas representing the love and respect in you for up keeping you dignity. Thank you for sharing it.
What a wonderful poem. A world without dignity is not worth living in. Well penned.10 deservedly.
The heart-felt words of this magnificent poem flow so smoothly and eloquently. Like the melody of a powerful heart song!