Wednesday, November 5, 2008
Digging A Hole Comments
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Sexual attraction has killed it all
Emotions have become lost
Happiness left out to violently fall
We both evolve to mindless robots
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Nina Bej
30 December 2008
Damn. I love this poem. Especially the ending, it's so powerful. The only thing I would change is the line 'Temptation has grown to strong.' It should be 'too, ' not 'to.' Other than that, it's perfect!
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7/20/2025 11:46:16 PM # 1.0.0
Wise conclusion with poetic brilliance. You can read my poem Lust with refence to your theme. CP