in my head i'm digging deep
i'm going down and it's steep
i'm here,
but i'm there
...
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A nice poetic imagination, Alan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.
i'm digging a hole looking for a treasure and it fulfills my soul....... a very fine and creative poem, very imaginative and philosophical. thank you dear poet.
You dug your way to your innermost thoughts, . i enjoyed reading your poem. Great imagination! ! thank you dear Poetess. Tony
This poem comes across as imaginatively real, an incessant digging through life, being here and there, seemingly trying to find your inner spirit. Ignoring others trying to get your attention because you are so intent on finding the truth of something you aren't sure of. Truly great poem, you dug your way to your innermost thoughts, sharing them with us. Superb rhythm, imagery fantastic, throughout the poem I felt as if I was going down, down, down. Loved this one. RoseAnn
its real and with rhyming. wonderful write. please read some of mine and comment. :)
amazing rhyming. a real write. please read some of mine. :)
haha i like this one with all the rhyme and the and rhythm aND the onomatopoeia love this poem
Mighty grand poem! It's written as society exists today- fast and seemingly with racing thoughts. I loved it.
Sounds like life in general. We are always searching to find that happiness. they start throwing rocks and words to get my attention... Those people, places, and things that put bumps in the road. Very nice I loved it 10 all the way
Superb, man, deep inside our core sits our soul, our biggest treasure. Uless we truly find our soul and manage to let it rule our life all we want to do is.... digging Great feeling, I got while reading your poem
Awesome! A deep and touching write that clearly shows your talent and writing skills! You definitely have a way to freely expressing your inner-most thoughts! Your potential in the Poetry World is very high! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and please, keep giving the Poetry World more food for thought! God bless You! Romeo-New York City
Your poem reminds me of when I was searching, but the truth will set you free.