Friday, September 28, 2012

Digging Comments

Rating: 4.9

in my head i'm digging deep
i'm going down and it's steep
i'm here,
but i'm there
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Douglas Alan Stromback
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Myrna Migala 10 October 2020

Your poem reminds me of when I was searching, but the truth will set you free.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Alan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2017

i'm digging a hole looking for a treasure and it fulfills my soul....... a very fine and creative poem, very imaginative and philosophical. thank you dear poet.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 November 2015

You dug your way to your innermost thoughts, . i enjoyed reading your poem. Great imagination! ! thank you dear Poetess. Tony

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Adeline Foster 16 October 2015

Good job. Read mine _ Who AM I _ Adeline

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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

This poem comes across as imaginatively real, an incessant digging through life, being here and there, seemingly trying to find your inner spirit. Ignoring others trying to get your attention because you are so intent on finding the truth of something you aren't sure of. Truly great poem, you dug your way to your innermost thoughts, sharing them with us. Superb rhythm, imagery fantastic, throughout the poem I felt as if I was going down, down, down. Loved this one. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 04 April 2015

I felt good after reading your poem Douglas. Thank you

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Tanya Gupta 23 April 2014

its great.....................

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Lucifera Santez 20 August 2013

its real and with rhyming. wonderful write. please read some of mine and comment. :)

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Lucifera Santez 02 August 2013

amazing rhyming. a real write. please read some of mine. :)

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 August 2013

haha i like this one with all the rhyme and the and rhythm aND the onomatopoeia love this poem

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Astrid Eckstein 10 July 2013

Mighty grand poem! It's written as society exists today- fast and seemingly with racing thoughts. I loved it.

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Julie Schleppegrell 06 June 2013

Sounds like life in general. We are always searching to find that happiness. they start throwing rocks and words to get my attention... Those people, places, and things that put bumps in the road. Very nice I loved it 10 all the way

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Hans Vr 14 December 2012

Superb, man, deep inside our core sits our soul, our biggest treasure. Uless we truly find our soul and manage to let it rule our life all we want to do is.... digging Great feeling, I got while reading your poem

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Romeo Della Valle 29 October 2012

Awesome! A deep and touching write that clearly shows your talent and writing skills! You definitely have a way to freely expressing your inner-most thoughts! Your potential in the Poetry World is very high! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and please, keep giving the Poetry World more food for thought! God bless You! Romeo-New York City

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