Dig It, Baby Comments
Crawling towards the round spot of light,
(a spot light)
in the middle of the floor; (everything
else black) you start digging
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I love how this poem gets deeper as you read on and then ends in a light hearted way.
'You dig like a backhoe in chocolate ice cream, ... Past: Edger Allen Poe, Dante, Mr. Cummings, Ted Williams, American Indians.' A very effective archeology of words and feelings! Thanks.
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7/20/2025 7:54:14 PM # 1.0.0
nice...The ending is fantastic. this poem has a shark pointing. the pointing is to the past time. the people of past that their dairies are in the depth part of our minds. well done.