'Difficult to gaze' - I agree with you. Your poem is very short as if you wanted to compact a story about Apocalypse -
'the endless loss in endless colours'... I think something very bad happened a long time ago and our human kind had been sentenced then...
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'Difficult to gaze' - I agree with you. Your poem is very short as if you wanted to compact a story about Apocalypse - 'the endless loss in endless colours'... I think something very bad happened a long time ago and our human kind had been sentenced then...