Thursday, September 11, 2014

Difficult Pain Comments

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Pain, excruciating pain I fear
Pain, one have to suffer in such illness
Pain, the period of pleasures far away
Making oneself suffer in such extreme.
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Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
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Roseann Shawiak 12 September 2014

The news itself makes us in such pains. Here the pain is a social concern for all. I really like how you ended the poem with this particular line, it added a lot of substance to your poem. Can definitely identify with your lines of pain in surgery, have had so much of it. Yes, there are many forms of pain and we humans usually get to feel most or all of them unfortunately. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem: Age - Old Dilemma, I appreciate you comments. RoseAnn

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Salini Nair 11 September 2014

fantastic poem on different aspects of pain...................nice poem sir

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Somanathan Iyer 11 September 2014

Different types of pains one undergo in life brilliantly shown through the write. Nice poem.

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