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You have such a good grasp of your English vocabulary which to some writers here may not be able to cope. So deep to fathom. I like your last line very much, so beautifully expressed.
Nice style for the thought chosen. The wording is nice and I liked the long line style of this piece. Another important thing was the completion of the sentences in the middle of the following line. Well Done
You are very good in English. A time-befitting write. I like it