Tuesday, September 27, 2016

Different Paces Comments

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They were moving at different paces
She was running, you were crawling
She was all grown up, you were still growing
She could not wait for you, time was moving
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2016

Growing up. Facing the laces of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Kanana 12 October 2016

quite a deep message of a grown up man trapped in a preteen-age character

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