Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Different, Kind Of, Sad. Comments

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Sorrows thrown into the river of styx.
Proselytising raindrops to teardrops.
Cry me an alter alternate reality.
Dark abstruse universe within me.
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Kenneth Cledera
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2020

Dark abstruse universe within me. Water ran a blithe obscurity. Now, give your last line. fine way of the use of words and expressions. a fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 February 2020

Cry me an alter alternate reality. Dark abstruse universe within me. Water ran a blithe obscurity. Give me your last.......... fine poem. tony Now,

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Chinedu Dike 31 July 2019

Well articulated and nicely encapsulated in heightened poetic diction with insight. Thanks for sharing, Kenneth.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2019

An excellent poetic expression, Kenneth...10+++

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