Saturday, May 9, 2009

Different By Choice Comments

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See the sky
like a roof over
our the heads
covering the earth.
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Afzal Shauq
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Mona Martinez 27 October 2009

wow. that was the coolest poem, when you said different be choice, i thought you were going to go another way. loved the suprise of the way you went with this poem because everything you said was true. the way you compared people to an animal. it true sometimes we are no better than them with the things we do and the choices we make. loved the intro, and the how you gotten to the main point. just made everything else seem so powerful throughout the poem.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 27 October 2009

Different By Choice refusing to better ourselves to live in peace and happiness. what a great poem Afzal! indeed it recites the Bitter Reality! by instinct animals mastering the art of balanced living...///

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