Monday, March 10, 2008

Different Comments

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Each of us is different,
None of us the same.
It doesn't matter what colour,
Why do we call names?
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Natalie Sapphire
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Greenwolfe 1962 12 March 2008

I read all your poems Natalie and I came here to leave my comment. I see that Yoonoos got here before me, as usual. I'm not surprised he left his comment here as well. This, I believe, is your best poem. The last two lines are as good as anyone here can write. I want you to know that particularly. Write more like them, and you'll be one of the best. Congratulations Natalie, and don't let the trials of your teen years destroy your confidence and belief in yourself. If you get a good education, particularly a good dictionary. You'll have it made. GW62

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Mike D 10 March 2008

Wow Natalie, excellent poem. What a peaceful world it would be if everyone was as open minded as you.

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