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You sure can make the reader put his thinking cap on poor or rich happiness with your lot is the winner, just a few words with such a huge meaning which you are so good at writing cheers...regards

Simple and nice. An Esteemed Person, if he happens to lose his modesty, shall die if the lost modesty is regained! said in ThirukkuRaL 969. Refer my poem 'An Esteemed Person'

Just five lines! How many things to take note of? Amazing...

yes this amazing world. everyone dies for something

Truth is dripping like a drop nice poem thank u for sharing, read my O my Almighty and others and vote and comment if you wish

Very true said, this is amazing world, but death is sure! .. Beautiful poem with great message.. Thank you Sir, for the inspiring comments on Are women safe? ...but am sorry too, as my friends suggested me to immediately delete the poem at once for my security, before it is noticed..what she said is you are safe now, but displaying it, why to create unnecessary troubles..Thanks a lot..

We have only this world with a short time to live. Better do it in a right way. More kindness and humanity please.

short but v meaningful poem..a gud write

Short and indepth poem. Very meaningfull read dear Ramesh Rai

sweet but serious poem

yes, your poem is an extension of what Ghalib said: hota he shab -o- roz tamaasha mere aagay! ! !

Short and sweet, a great poem.

Both die for what they have. Maybe they also live for what they have. What a dichotomy! Beautifully presented. Thank you.