Friday, June 1, 2012

Differences Comments

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have you ever thought
there are many things,
that are not been taught.
that are the differences,
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choco pie shreyasi
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Shreyasi B 11 June 2012

thanku so much sharad.....no its not like that i have all seen that around me! ~! this poem came to my mind when one day while goin' to school i saw a boy selling pineapples....and that's the moment when i had this poem in my mind! ! anyway thanku for ur comment..its very rare that i get any comments on my poems in poemhunter.com....thanku! !

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Sharad Juneja 07 June 2012

A nice take...I guess it's what all u have seen around u n u have penned it in the form of poerty..Nice one

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