Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Diet Coke Comments

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I eat to live not live to eat
but I can still enjoy my food.
As I am quite sure I should.
I dine on vegetables and meat
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Jennifer Perryman 25 August 2007

Hi ivor, Excellent poem, and very funny. I have one problem, I love cheeseburgers I am not fat, I only weight a hundred pounds, I hate diet coke. I love classic coke. This is wonderful, as all of your work. Bravo, ivor They made me give them my real name, so if you do not know me, I am Jenna Day.

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Who's Erwhatsit 28 June 2007

Funny, true, and all while follwoing the same rhyme scheme. You are a master!

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Too true, Ivor. If people spent more time taking care of themselves than meddling in others affairs, just think how healthy the world would be. Nice one.

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