Diesel and dust,
flaking castles and roses, and spots of rust.
Who said living on a narrow boat
would be glamorous?
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You always capture the mood and spirit with amazing clarity. Wonderful as always. ~Ray
A glorious tribute to the tough life, warts and all. Written with eloquence and an absence of clutter, you have certainly inspired me to come for a visit. Finely crafted poem. love, Allie xxxx
Forget the glamour, the appeal here shines through - no need for polish - you convey the affinity that exists betweend the natural world and the human spirit, and the harmony of a community bonded by a lifestyle afloat. I agree with Ivan, great economy of words that conveys so much. justine xx
Sounds pretty good to me. Get painting now, and smarten up 'Plod' and polish the brass. Give her love. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Francesca, this is a wonderful cameo, powerfully written with an economy which speaks volumes... Rgds, Ivan
I love it! Lean, strong and thoroughly healthy..