Monday, December 10, 2007

Diesel And Dust Comments

Rating: 2.6

Diesel and dust,
flaking castles and roses, and spots of rust.
Who said living on a narrow boat
would be glamorous?
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Francesca Johnson
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Robert Howard 29 November 2008

I love it! Lean, strong and thoroughly healthy..

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Raymond Wright 24 December 2007

You always capture the mood and spirit with amazing clarity. Wonderful as always. ~Ray

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Alison Cassidy 24 December 2007

A glorious tribute to the tough life, warts and all. Written with eloquence and an absence of clutter, you have certainly inspired me to come for a visit. Finely crafted poem. love, Allie xxxx

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R H 16 December 2007

Forget the glamour, the appeal here shines through - no need for polish - you convey the affinity that exists betweend the natural world and the human spirit, and the harmony of a community bonded by a lifestyle afloat. I agree with Ivan, great economy of words that conveys so much. justine xx

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Ernestine Northover 11 December 2007

Sounds pretty good to me. Get painting now, and smarten up 'Plod' and polish the brass. Give her love. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ivan Donn Carswell 10 December 2007

Francesca, this is a wonderful cameo, powerfully written with an economy which speaks volumes... Rgds, Ivan

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