Sunday, June 13, 2010

Died In Dover Comments

Rating: 3.5

Waves hit the white chalk
She was unsure where to walk
Along the cliff or off it
Her emotions drained
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Sonya Khan
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Afzal Shauq 16 June 2010

a perfect write with good idea..quite impressive 10/10

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2010

sad and hope drained lines... u convey the feelings amply...and well keep writing sat

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