Thursday, May 1, 2008

Die With Me. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Forever,
Is such a long time, time to waste, time that’s going no matter what
The facts of life are that people die
But alone, not I
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Aden Orie
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Bella Hernandez 19 November 2011

Beautiful poem! exactly what i feel everyday! you completely capture what so many people are searching for in their lives great job Aden :) ~Bella

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Mohammed Albalushi 14 December 2008

' I can have them with you And I want you to Die, With me ' alot feelings in this words, very nice poem, welldone my friend, wish u all the best

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Aijaz Asif 13 October 2008

a very beautiful composition indeed...thanks 10

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Alexander Hale 12 October 2008

this is a great poem, beautifully written. +10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Die with me is a beautiful composition. Love it.

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James Hooson 22 June 2008

good poem short but strong i really like it and the first 2 lines i wrote scare me cos im not usually that smart to right satuff lyk that lol

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Lisa Sargent 11 June 2008

love this poem. my favorite.

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

i absolutely love this poem...so deep and full of meaning. Good Job Tyease

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Jade Fish 09 May 2008

that's like really good! ! ! i love it...

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Annie Girl 08 May 2008

nice poem and also nice choice of words.

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this is a nice poem.

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Cassidy Cook 08 May 2008

very deep... and almost dark... but heres a thought on that. whether they die with you, or not... taking your memories of them and their love with you to the other side is like having them there with you... in a way right?

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Mark Nwagwu 08 May 2008

very deep meaning, die with me - I like to take the one I love with me wherever I may be on this earth - would i take her with me in the hereafter? don't know, that's not up to me. All I know is I'll see her when we both get there and we'll be in eternal bliss. this is a great poem, philosophical, deel, deep, deep.

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Maria Sudibyo 07 May 2008

It reminds me about the manga I read. 'Chicago' by Tamura Yumi. One of the character suits the poem very well. He will take his girl with him (to die) even if she won't. It makes his partner feels jealous and think to leave him just die so the girl will cry. It just some great scene beside the whole great story. Hope you can read it to.

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Alex Rios 06 May 2008

Really touching. That's really deep and amazing. your friend, panda

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Bootiful Kid 05 May 2008

wow, this poem is deep, you've got talent!

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Kaci Souisa 05 May 2008

wow. its really deep. i sat here thinking ' yeah, i want someone to die with like that.' very touching.

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Kali Abyss 05 May 2008

I really like sad poems, and with the word Die T_T sad and awesome!

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Monkey Mendez 05 May 2008

TT~TT I don't want to die alone either... A touching poem

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Stone Granite 04 May 2008

This is a good one! Stone

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