Forever,
Is such a long time, time to waste, time that’s going no matter what
The facts of life are that people die
But alone, not I
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' I can have them with you And I want you to Die, With me ' alot feelings in this words, very nice poem, welldone my friend, wish u all the best
good poem short but strong i really like it and the first 2 lines i wrote scare me cos im not usually that smart to right satuff lyk that lol
i absolutely love this poem...so deep and full of meaning. Good Job Tyease
very deep... and almost dark... but heres a thought on that. whether they die with you, or not... taking your memories of them and their love with you to the other side is like having them there with you... in a way right?
very deep meaning, die with me - I like to take the one I love with me wherever I may be on this earth - would i take her with me in the hereafter? don't know, that's not up to me. All I know is I'll see her when we both get there and we'll be in eternal bliss. this is a great poem, philosophical, deel, deep, deep.
It reminds me about the manga I read. 'Chicago' by Tamura Yumi. One of the character suits the poem very well. He will take his girl with him (to die) even if she won't. It makes his partner feels jealous and think to leave him just die so the girl will cry. It just some great scene beside the whole great story. Hope you can read it to.
wow. its really deep. i sat here thinking ' yeah, i want someone to die with like that.' very touching.
I really like sad poems, and with the word Die T_T sad and awesome!
Beautiful poem! exactly what i feel everyday! you completely capture what so many people are searching for in their lives great job Aden :) ~Bella