Pijush Biswas

Pijush Biswas

Srirampur, Nadia, West Bengal, India
Saturday, September 15, 2018

Die In Marriage Comments

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Marriage is at so far distance woe
First people take birth in rich family
Unwilling to choice low-place, then allow;
If e'er they thron'd as king, be willy
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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) i wonder what you mean by Die In Marriage. E'en the life to short, or hugely tie Of both, from dwan to dusk, or mist to dew, i suggest too short and dawn. (oops!) bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

i read parts of your PH 'bio' and i read this poem once. i applaud people who strive to express themselves in a 2nd or 3rd or 4th language, but i truly had too much trouble with the poem to enjoy it or understand a lot of it. good luck with writing, health, and finding a wife! (cont.)

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Pijush Biswas

Pijush Biswas

Srirampur, Nadia, West Bengal, India
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