Do you feel the sweltering heat?
Emanating from my slow burning heart!
Do you hear that dernier cri?
Made by my moribund mind!
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The impact of the title is arresting, - like a James Bond movie! I loved your last para very much.A philosophical interpretation could be that this perishable body must die several times before our polluted soul is able to attain that ideal perfection of Plato's 'Good' & thereby transcend this wordly bondage. -Raj Nandy
To love and be not loved in return is a fate worse than death it seems and yet you survive. Broken hearts can be mended so easily by a more kindly lady
OUCH! This one hurts. I've walked in your shoes a few times myself, and it's a painful journey. Naked emotions here, really hit close for anyone who's ever been abandoned by love. Well done! Linda :)
Very well penned with perfect words................ BEST WISHES..................
You write well..but more of crying is not good for body and mind..take care..good poem
good use of vocab but my poems are alittle simpler than that
A wishful thinking 'to have a second death'.........is like the first death was a fake death! ! ! ! ! A wise writes Sathya!
very nice. and touchy poem. excellent selection of words. i loved it.
An interior wound expressed in more modern way, however the inspiration is deeply and naturally religious, a serious composition.
how many deaths do we die Sathya- amazing portayal of love, agony, betrayal. appropriately titled. very moving10
Wonderful feelings of love and mental agony portayed beautifully in this poem.A 10!
your power of imagination and the way u expressed is really astonishing! ......10+
A very descriptive and in-dept poem...passion and suffering portrayed so well...an excellent piece. Top marks: -)
You were right, I did like this poem, it's very imaginative. I like thus poem alot.... i just need a lot more time to read your other ones