Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Die Another Death Comments

Rating: 4.7

Do you feel the sweltering heat?
Emanating from my slow burning heart!
Do you hear that dernier cri?
Made by my moribund mind!
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Sathya Narayana
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Jessica Harrington 10 November 2008

You were right, I did like this poem, it's very imaginative. I like thus poem alot.... i just need a lot more time to read your other ones

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Raj Nandy 28 October 2008

The impact of the title is arresting, - like a James Bond movie! I loved your last para very much.A philosophical interpretation could be that this perishable body must die several times before our polluted soul is able to attain that ideal perfection of Plato's 'Good' & thereby transcend this wordly bondage. -Raj Nandy

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Nia Riz 26 October 2008

i liked this poem....so i wrote a poem with the same heading+

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Ivor Hogg 06 October 2008

To love and be not loved in return is a fate worse than death it seems and yet you survive. Broken hearts can be mended so easily by a more kindly lady

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Linda Ori 05 October 2008

OUCH! This one hurts. I've walked in your shoes a few times myself, and it's a painful journey. Naked emotions here, really hit close for anyone who's ever been abandoned by love. Well done! Linda :)

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Richa Dhodi 05 October 2008

Nice poem.. thanks for sharing

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Costa Anakiev 03 October 2008

well done, but there are too many emotions

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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

beautiful............10! !

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Gargi Saha 02 October 2008

Very well penned with perfect words................ BEST WISHES..................

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Indira Renganathan 29 September 2008

You write well..but more of crying is not good for body and mind..take care..good poem

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good use of vocab but my poems are alittle simpler than that

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 September 2008

A wishful thinking 'to have a second death'.........is like the first death was a fake death! ! ! ! ! A wise writes Sathya!

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2008

very nice. and touchy poem. excellent selection of words. i loved it.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 27 September 2008

good work really rejuvenating

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 26 September 2008

An interior wound expressed in more modern way, however the inspiration is deeply and naturally religious, a serious composition.

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Ershad Mazumder 26 September 2008

Excellant painting of pains.

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Mamta Agarwal 26 September 2008

how many deaths do we die Sathya- amazing portayal of love, agony, betrayal. appropriately titled. very moving10

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Koyel Mitra 26 September 2008

Wonderful feelings of love and mental agony portayed beautifully in this poem.A 10!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 September 2008

your power of imagination and the way u expressed is really astonishing! ......10+

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Hades Pandemonium 25 September 2008

A very descriptive and in-dept poem...passion and suffering portrayed so well...an excellent piece. Top marks: -)

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Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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