Die And Let Live Comments

I hope no babies are born when/IF I die, .....; UNLESS, of course, they turn out to.....be.....JUST LIKE ME! ! ! : ) bri

What description of a emotional moment and perception. Love how the poem goes. TFS

beautiful, deep and meaningful, a lovely piece from start to finish, great job

Very in-depth analysis in the writing i felt...i specially liked the phrase blacked clothed men and women and their particularisation mainly Islam followed by the others-Christs, clergymen, priests, lawyers and so on.They are coated black as there are lies hidden for truth or perhaps they absorb all the colours of the white polychrome to represent the darkest sides of life.Well done

A very emotional poem with a wonderful ending. Great poem well written.

amazing use of words..thanks for sharing

So beautiful! I just keept thinking about the circle of life. About a darkness and a light who together stir everything around us. Very beautiful an emotinal. My fav part was Be brave Put her body in the grave Her life couldn't have been saved The angel of death is now her slave I absolutley love it!

the feelings of death and life, , , imagery and a thought provoking writing intense a new dimension, , , , ,

Dear Nader, Human destiny the same way you did one is born into the world and the other dies...and it was good that man enjoys living and then die of natural causes...i love u work.

the Lord above all Well done, like always.It touches me so much. Hope to read more of you: p: p: p

probably you are right that one dead, another born. I don't think the death is a horrible thing to happen.

When a baby is born, the God shows that he still believes in humans and humanity. there are hops, they are chances. the life is going on, but in different conditions and different aspects. there are lots of things that we never can deny, at the top of them, is death. and there is a creature that we all will see a day, He is called the angel Of death. But at the end, Allah will bless us all in his infinity light well done. so great

very powerful rhymes. did she thinx she is immortal, she is a human afte all. i love ur work.

oooh amazing....i would like to appreciate on the theme you selected...really superb and also the end was something good..i really enjoyed it...and thanks for sharing »so close«

It was adorable, specially the way it ends, it seems a transmogrification!

Touching and lovely lyric my dear poet

always a joy to read your work, nice structured lines, a beautiful piece excellent job +10

I get the point here, you have your own style which is symbolism in the dark shadow..deep and nice. It sounds like a mother fighting and giving for her life for newborn baby....but will a lil child understand how strong mother be for them, not just to birthing them but to raise them as a good person..that's harder, can we thank her as what she did....and for the orphans not be neglected we are their family, we are bro sis mom and dad and grandparents or whatever to them...the new generation is not a possession of last generation but they are our responsibility in life continuity, through love it was connected so peace is a rope to tie us together_Soul