Sunday, June 16, 2013

Didi! Comments

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I live moment by moment
no saving, planning, scheming for future
my present is my treasure
my present is my life
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Shahzia Batool
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Yash Shinde 01 May 2014

A beautiful write didi....... An affectionate and humble write indeed....... A child heart, a mild heart, cute rhyming... Its always good to be a child at heart, give, crave for love in return (although not advisable) , forget the past, cherish the present and greet everyone with a smile........ May this write of your fill joy in hearts forever! .... ~Y.S.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 04 July 2013

Remember always, follow your heart, what is in it, what is a wish, follow through, because there lies lessons for you, let them be good or bad, but just open for what is there. I went through many of these feelings and I know I sure got my lessons, why I bless everybody in my life because they made me what I am today. When you get it, the whole world will be your best friend.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

A kind of khidmat the best way to worship to please to provide happiness Glory to be Allah keep on carrying up to unending end

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2013

nice one didi.affection of brother n sister is purely divine n can b compared with mother only. i too have posted one poem with the same title. affection n love for u didi.

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 June 2013

So beautifully written. Living in present is the best policy without worrying what happened and what will happen. You do have a child's heart: alive, wild and pure.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 June 2013

my present is my treasure Live the present seems to be the best policy. Thank you.

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David Wood 17 June 2013

A kind heart is worth the most because it loves. A Lovely write Shahzia.

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Yasmin Khan 17 June 2013

'a kind and mild, alive and wild, pure and child heart' that believes in love and preaches love, a nice write

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Wahab Abdul 16 June 2013

oh, here india and in bengali ''didi ' means ''sister '' - elder

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Wahab Abdul 16 June 2013

in the last 3 lines if you omit heart heart heart,3 times, yet the meaning is clear and understood,2nd line is very weak..hower 2nd stanza is the heart of the poem and where from the poem stands out and out.....a lovely poem, have i gone very critical? yet i love this poem.....give you 10...

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Valerie Dohren 16 June 2013

A lovely poem Shahzia - I didn't know you had this pseudonym.

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Awesome, check out Stardust.

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Payal Parande 16 June 2013

the one who know the one who show the one whose soul the one who make us whole the one i wish to be the one is Shahzia didi.............. thank you so much...i am speechless

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Farah Ilyas 16 June 2013

And what for whom? who call u ma'm..hahah...lovely poem & nice dedication....am i wrong if i show my parched tongue..awesome line

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Parul Rastogi 16 June 2013

Di...you are such a sweetheart! ! ! ! :) Loved it...

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Passionate Reader 16 June 2013

this is one of the cutest poems i have ever read in my life! ! ! :) it's lovely and touches the heart. All these girls and guys are really blessed to have such a nice diddi ;) my heart knows no policies no politics a kind and mild heart alive and wild heart a pure and child heart Only a pure heart has all these qualities. Superb! ! ! u made my day. this work is commendable! ! ! :)

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Indira Babbellapati 16 June 2013

This z the kind of poetry I enjoy the most; no polemics, no scope for rejoinders, no need for a defense. Flowing straight from an untouched corner of the heart without any jerks from hard sounding vocab. Keep it up, lady!

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Gajanan Mishra 16 June 2013

pure and child heart, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Kanav Justa 16 June 2013

a kind and mild heart alive and wild heart a pure and child heart sure you have got a great heart, , , , nice poem, , , liked the content , , , , shows your decent character

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