Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Did You Think? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you think that
I was gonna wait for you
Did you think that
I was gonna leave it all behind for you
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Tori Fleck Fournelle
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DaNa XxX 26 September 2009

really well written...you know thats what i like about poetry..you can express you feelings...and for us (readers) we can feel your feelings (ur anger) ... this poem is awesome.. ^_^ 10/10 DaNa...

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Winnie Angel 06 September 2009

Well written a frank straight expression of anger..sometimes we need to express our feel clearly so that the person comes to know abt his/her fault.....winnie

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Tyease Collins 06 September 2009

I can feel the...anger...the...passion in this piece. Freakin awesome poem -Ellie

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Tori Fleck 27 August 2009

yeah this is how I've felt for years!

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Nangula Immanuel 26 August 2009

That's the beauty of poetry, you can express yourself! In this poem, one can see the anger, the wanting to understand, wanting answers. Really nice! : -)

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syaz wafea 26 August 2009

wow..is this really how u feel? ? nicely written..rlly xpress ur true feelings

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