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i found it sad and inligthening at the same time

I loved it. Especially.... they step to the ledge feel their last summers breeze caress the rivers cascading down features of stone and step

a good and meningful write..................

powerful write i think your point was well made 10

where do you step too.. and that feeling on the way down.. how would it feel.. with no one around to hear the screams..iip

Interesting poem....well expressed