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good poem. may be ignore some spelling mistakes..its quite ok

There is much truth in this. True poets write for themselves, and not in hopes of fleeting glory. For it is so fleeting, this time we have. And our words are our descendants. Excellent! xxxxElys

slowly, slowly as snail reach my goal your name made by cheating tomorrow soon it will fall, ............... i think you are on loosing trail..giving so much .good piece...10

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS? DON'T BE DISRESPECTING THIS CHILD'S 'CULTURE' AFTER ALL, THEY DON'T TEACH ENGLISH IN THE HOOD ANYMORE. THEY TEACH: UMM, UMM, MMM! BARACK HUSSEIN OBAMA!

Right Tamara! I don't often do this but you brought your poetry to my attention and I am going to give my opinion. This is a good poem if it were not for all the grammer and spelling errors... I also note the sheer volume of comments on this and other pieces you bring to our attention...I guess you have been heavily promoting your work? Not a bad thing, but it doesn't prove your popularity. You certainly do not need my added opinion, and if you do ask for it, I would be grateful, as I am sure many other of your readers would too, if you present such offerings, in the best possible light. No offence meant. All the best to you in your poetic future Smiling at you Tai

When one is angry, his heart creates and excels, that's what you are doing. Keep your pen busy.

within an hour you will reach by your army you will be on top of all, poetry kids killedby you click and click shot, and shot with no rule my goal is loving ones being mate with my soul, congrat. for your fall again a good piece with reality touches.. well done dear tamara 10/10

oh my that was soul wretching yet so true...wisely put into a poem with so much feeling and expression..10

Poetry is not about numbers that any proficient user can tally-up at the blink of an eye...It doesen't serve as testimony to quality....not on this site. The TOP 500Poet's list is a flong-used scam, mostly by bopers who think that by padding their daily velocity performance, that it will somehow reap gold literary seeds for them. This could not be further from the truth...Poetic Truth comes from within the core & fibers of the hear which feeds off the right halve dominance of the human mind. Case in point is: Take a look as to who has more than 6,000 I.P. hits.....now check how many poems they have had on site over the past 2 weeks.....In the past week, (alegedly) , this individual with 3 names in one(The unholy trinity, i call him) has actually increased his daily padding ritual since he stopped posting....Now, is this person 52 cards short of a full deck or what? lol! Anyway, we should all self-promote to a degree...and all of us should take pride in overachievement....and no one should think us aloof for wanting others to know how excited we may be about our achievement(s) .Keep that pen pumping, young lady & concentrate on topic & theme that will display the gifts you have, as a writer....Pay no mind to numbers, as they hold no poetic value, HERE.....And instead, pay all your mind to words, your words & the creative way you choose to structure them. FjR

wow great poetry with much of emotions help em inspire too i need support * I Need Poems Translator (in another tounge) Fellow poets around the world, It's my pleasure to inform you all that at last I have found a kind-hearted publisher and as part of our project, he suggested me that if possible some of my hits poems should be tranlated into another foreign languages or tribal dialects. Would you might to translate one of my original poems preferably of your own choice? With your consent, I truthfully include your respective name and your painstakingly translated poem in my ever-dream book of poetry. (December this year is our target month for the book launching) We believe as a poets that not only temperament and a common anguish unite writers but also a PARTICULAR PLACE, A PARTICULAR TOUNGE! Sincerely yours, RMD Marchan, Philippines email me thru: marchanjet@yahoo.com ROMMEL MARK DOMINGUEZ MARCHAN

Tamara, You have given me an idea: I am going to pay people to click on me and read my poems...lol...lol...lol....I am illustrious unknown! Great lines! Love & Light!

good poem, wonderful liens thanks Tamara

oh this is a wonderful story of rise and fall by its own hoary way, falsehood still scruples of its wrong doing, as everything has its own god as.fear of falling is always inherent by the reality, and truth conquers at last, excellent write, yet a write of unique genre....10++++

at; last an issue concerning all of us.you are our leader who brings out such issues. i can only do one thing. salute my leader for her marvelous work love surya

so sad..well..i think it will be ok..it is a good thing it is so simple..yes...iip the one below is well an eater of carrion..iip..

Ms. Hanaring, I do not know you, nor would I consider myself anything but a novice reader. This Poem I read I believe was directed at a person that has about 1700 poems, whose age seems to change every week, You hit the nail right on. Expose them for what they are, , , , , FAKE Peace

I accept and appreciate your view of this poem! It is cent percent happening here! Genuine works are made into a farce by such acts! Timely utterance of a genuine heart!

Great piece of writing. Well done.10 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Well written my dear friend.....your heart always leaves an impression on the reader with everything your poetic soul creates....that why you're admired by many...keep up the great work Tamara

I don't get your point on this piece of work. I presumed that people who writes poems particularly subversive ones is in danger of being persecuted. Am I right or wrong? To love's fellowmen, honesty and sincerity, etc. are qualifications of a real human being, a creature of God. I still considered this work as poetry because the line composition speaks of truth, feelings, there is a freedom of expression here.. A creative way of speaking within self to share his/her ideas to the general public. Curtail this freedom and somebody is in trouble, his out of his psyche. Thanks