The flowers have died and weltered,
Like the memories he has built.
I wish that day we spend together,
Could have lasted forever.
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Beautiful love poem depicting longing for the loved one gone away and expressing doubt about the reciprocity of that love with same intensity. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Emma, all 23 of your poems were submitted on the same day,23 March 2009. Do you ever visit this site anymore? Will you ever know that this poem was chosen as member poem of the day on 20 January 2016, almost seven years later? I hope so, because you do have talent. Congratulations!
beautifully woven the words, thank you. it has the real meaning of love and the reader will also fel the same isolation.10+ please.
You will get it right because, someone loves you. Nice work.
What a beautiful poem..... Its a nice write -Ash
Excellent poem. Your expression of emotion is portrayed brilliantly, and you have arranged the words and sentences perfectly for a great flow. I give this poem a 10.
Fantasic! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I L.l.l.l.l.l.l.o.o.o.o.o.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.e.e.e.e.e.e.e this poem. It's so full of emotions.
I always seem to get it wrong, To me you were my fav. song: I love this line..great poem-10
nice question to ask could be a little bit late maybe.