Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Did You Love Me? Comments

Rating: 4.2

The flowers have died and weltered,
Like the memories he has built.
I wish that day we spend together,
Could have lasted forever.
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Emma Jane Pearson
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Manonton Dalan 20 January 2016

nice question to ask could be a little bit late maybe.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 January 2016

Beautiful love poem depicting longing for the loved one gone away and expressing doubt about the reciprocity of that love with same intensity. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kim Barney 20 January 2016

Emma, all 23 of your poems were submitted on the same day,23 March 2009. Do you ever visit this site anymore? Will you ever know that this poem was chosen as member poem of the day on 20 January 2016, almost seven years later? I hope so, because you do have talent. Congratulations!

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Palitha Ranatunge 20 January 2016

beautifully woven the words, thank you. it has the real meaning of love and the reader will also fel the same isolation.10+ please.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 January 2016

You will get it right because, someone loves you. Nice work.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 20 January 2016

It's very beautiful. Nice work.

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Dakotah French 07 April 2009

That's really nice I like your work :)

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What a beautiful poem..... Its a nice write -Ash

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Pensive Phoenix 22 March 2009

Excellent poem. Your expression of emotion is portrayed brilliantly, and you have arranged the words and sentences perfectly for a great flow. I give this poem a 10.

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Hailie Workman 22 March 2009

this is such a cute poem! i love it! good job

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Shutter Queen 20 March 2009

Fantasic! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I L.l.l.l.l.l.l.o.o.o.o.o.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.e.e.e.e.e.e.e this poem. It's so full of emotions.

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jENNY lIND 19 March 2009

Marvelous, simply marvelous. mmmmmwa

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*Innocent Angel* 17 March 2009

I always seem to get it wrong, To me you were my fav. song: I love this line..great poem-10

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