Did You-I Did Comments

Did you ever try to shout To the top of your lungs Did you ever run Cause your dreams break? I just cried, cried hard Till my tears ran out Sat flat, unmoved And the pain got out. Did you? I did. with what a conviction and certainty you say i did, i did, i did. such a woman poetess i see rarely. thank you for this greatness in character. God bless you

An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression

Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it!

I love it, well said. :)

indeed i did. well done.

I wish I could. I wish I DID. wow. I like this poem! :)

Impressive and interesting verses

Take it to the limit one more time (The Eagles) ..........I did.......Great one....I love it... Jim Troy

live hard... or dont bother! like this one a lot!

just like the old times huh.....i got it...

Fantastic flow and rythm throughout all except the first stansa, which just didn't do it for me. I love the concept though and the feeling you have put into it. Kind Regards Gyp's

this poem makes me imagine myself doing just that. this is a beautiful poem, really. +10

Interesting concept you have.

I did. These moments make us stronger.

A very nice way of expressing one's feeling thru a poem. Beautiful. Short but overflowing in thought.

Salute the stress......10

this is really heartfelt. it is lovely piece well penned for real

I like the way this poem speaks to the reader and the sense of sympathy and empathy the reader can feel. Great work.

We have all felt that way. That is why we write poetry. We cannot speak our pain with our human voice. ---Greenwolfe 1962

Looks like you roared from the sky and crash landed! Or maybe you took off and landed safely, having burnt out all the bad fuel in your system as you flew. One way or another you wrote a poem that helps us all to appreciate the feeling of wanting to freak out and blow our top when life gets too hot to handle! Bon courage.10.