Did you ever tell her the truth?
Did you ever tell her, I didn't know you were lovers?
Did you ever tell her, I had no clue you were ever together?
Because you denied that you were ever involved.
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A difficult subject. You show the depth of feeling, the pain, the anger, the sorrow. I think the variations in line length help to bring out the ebbing and flowing emotion here. Once again an expressive piece and an enjoyable experience, thank you June.
You have said it through all the emotions a woman can summon in times like this. While not all men are like this, or so I am told, there are those that are, and they are the ones that make us wonder if the next man will be the same, so we go slowly. Some women throw caution to the wind, and go for the next guy anyway. This poem puts the whole cheating game in perspective and even the guys can see how we feel when things like this happen. The heart doesn't just break in these times, but shatters, and we try to put it back together again piece by piece. A 10+++++ and every woman knows how this feels. Love & hugs, Barbara