Sunday, November 1, 2009

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As i rimernise life was so great like a shinning star in space
Right before you turn and leave me like a disgrace.
What m i, an old boots with an untied lace
That make my desired hard to fulfilled in this place
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Prakash Mehra 01 November 2009

'What m i, an old boots with an untied lace' I liked this line very much. Nice poem.

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