Did You Ever..... Comments

'things felt so natural like nothing could go wrong a love like ours made of friendship was strong' - These lines remind me of feelings of love and tenderness, as also the following: 'remember when we first met everything was new the smiles and the laughter everything was true' Thanks for ending with this brilliant, optimistic note: 'but like forever our love can begin again'. - Yes, it can.

Very good poem...thanks Somegirl

That is beautiful. If only my poetry was that nice, my ex might not have left me (LOL)