Friday, November 24, 2017

Did You Ever Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you ever climb a mountain, or strive to do your best
To raise yourself above the clouds and reach the highest crest;
And when your alpine goal grew near so high your heart could stop,
It seemed the last five hundred yards were further from the top?
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 November 2017

yes but individually everyone must know lovely words sir Poet Carpenter Everybody has a story, so I won't tell you mine. everybody has a mountain they think they need to climb. everybody has a journey, someplace they need to go; but when the end seems out of reach that's when they, (everyone) need to know:

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Practicing Poetess 25 November 2017

A Hearty Welcome to Poem Hunter! This poem is almost TOO good- - One gets the feeling that you've been writing for awhile, and have only just now begun posting poems from your collection. looking forward to more to come! This poem deserves a rating of 10. Will also be saving it to My Favourite Poems List.

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