Saturday, March 11, 2006

Did We Meet? Comments

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When you met me today
all you saw were
empty pockets.
You didn't care to notice
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Mary Nagy
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Brian Dorn 10 September 2006

Mary, a brilliant ending and a powerful lesson on making snap judgements and not making the effort to really get to know someone. Great write! ! Brian

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Uriah Hamilton 11 March 2006

Dear Mary, If I ever meet you, I won't forget you, I promise!

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Duncan Wyllie 11 March 2006

One thing I do know, I've seen great words from you today Mary.Another wonderful piece of art.Love Duncan

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Gina Onyemaechi 11 March 2006

That second verse above all is razor-sharp in its poignancy, Mary. And as for you, Mr Tanguay, with respect, in my view well-written emotional poetry is just as acceptable as any other kind of poetry. Warm regards Mary, Gina.

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David Tanguay 11 March 2006

Mary: You also, use alot of emotion in your writings, but I guess it helps to share our load with others.

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