Did The Elephant Fly Or The Rhino Lay Eggs? Comments

An intriguung ans intresting piece with little images that I could relate with. Thanks for sharing

It is what greedy humans do and that is to destroy what Mother Nature has created. Your poem touches on every dire aspect of the animal kingdom. Congrats on being selected for poem of the day.

(8) ....OF COURSE your POET's Notes is correct, but I pointed out the personal noun only was not correct. The you must be the we. And this absorbing most beautiful poem from your thoughtful mind, Dr. Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek deserves a myriad of 10's. I truly enjoyed very much this most absorbing poem all time, I have ever read.

(7) So sorry, I have to correct your POET's NOTES: You must all be sorry for the destruction of our beautiful planet EARTH. This is NOT TRUE, it must be: WE ALL must be sorry for the destruction of our beautiful planet. The you must be changed in we then the grammar is correct when you use we. Thank you.

(6) ...CONGRATULATIONS, Dr. Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek, God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. I am sure you still can teach and tell your grandchildren about the animals you mentioned. BUT never forget: we are the destroyers of our own loved planet Earth. I know what you wish to tell us/ mankind having created this most absorbing, this most beautiful poem. Thankfully yours, Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess, Evangelist and world traveler. .

(5) ...This is the greatest tragedy our loved earth shall experience, but then we are all no more, the generations after your grandchildren will experience this end will endure this. I have enjoyed very much your thought-provoking poesie. Thank you so much for sharing and today Poem Hunter has chosen this as the Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray! Poem Hunter Org. and their Team always make a perfect choice.

(4) ...I have never read such a poetic poem, so thought-provoking and very educative. This is true poetry, loveliest and we as the readers can learn some more from your caring words that make us think. And as you perhaps know already, we as human beings on this forsaken earth full of sin, we are digging our own pitfall upon this earth.

(3) ...After this, the stronger one kills the weaker one in order to survive. So was that too amongst the animals. When they are hungry they kill the weaker ones in order to stay in life/to survive. BUT I am sure your grand kids will be able to see and watch with their own eyes the animals you mentioned in your educative poem and very thought-provoking.

(2) ....the Garden of Eden, then those humans did not obey the rules God made. The devil co-worked too and so God's most beautiful Garden was destroyed and these first human beings were chased from their residence which was once all peace, love, and understanding. All animals united in one greatest peace and love.

(1) ...This is the law of nature and God has created Nature. As one who believes in God, I dare to tell you that since the fall of Eden, the human being has chosen for its own pitfall/defeat. We had the completest and most perfect life God gave to us to live in full peace and love in the Garden of Eden. What God has created was perfect and most beautiful, and God has trusted the human being who may reside in

I join the poet's mourning caused by the destruction of planet earth by the brutality of the humankind. I agree with the 'Poet's Notes' too. Congratulations to the poet on this wonderful poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

Yes we all are sorry for the misdeeds of the worst animal on this planet. Wild animals kill others when they are hungry but their hunger is limited. Hunger of the worst animal is unlimited. A great poem I have ever read. after a long time I have seen a truly deserved poem selected as member's poem. I don't have words to congratulate Dr. Ahmed Gumma Siiddiek.

grand children, my explanation. elephants. birds. fishes, the destruction of this beautiful earth........ a poem which is in tune with the great problems we face. tony

Earth! ! Humanity! ! ! ! ! I am afraid to give a lie! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A phenomenal poem, a thoughtful work filled with depth, we are leaving each generation little and little of the precious wealth of this planets life, if we continue the worlds fauna will be a memory, and possibly nothing at all. A great poem and good choice for Poem of the day.!

When all those animals and plants are gone, we will be gone also. The Earth cannot survive without them, so our grandchildren will not need to be told anything. Nevertheless, an entertaining and thought-provoking poem. Congratulations for having it selected as member poem of the day!

A very good poem on the necessity of preservation of nature

Very powerful poem with an important message.. a ten..Congratulations on being selected POD..

A thoughtful poem, Do you think we should take the responsibility of future generation? I don't feel like this, who cared about us?

That is an impressive write, driving home the point you are making about the effects we human beings are having on mother earth! Congrats on poem of day!