Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Did It Really Happen? Was I Really There? Comments

Rating: 4.5

When it happen
Did I understand?
Or was I the only one there
Looking around oh so puzzled.
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Sandra Marie
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Brooke Lynn Moore 09 November 2008

I am not sure but I think that this poem is about September 11,2001 and if it is, then great job on capturing the raw emotion of what a child during that time would have been feeling.

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rajagopal haran 01 May 2008

this poem can be related to graveyard soliloquy also...well written...

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David Desantis 30 April 2008

your referring to the trade center bombing aren't you...i was actually your age when it happened...maybe a year older.....crazy, horrible, stuff...but your poem is very good in that it comes from within. You have a good deal of talent, especially for your age.

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