Did It Happen Again? Comments

Hi teenager, your feeling is very common in your age. You have expressed it properly and nicely Good work Rgds Nooruddeen

that was sweet...with an imagination of a inocent young teenager going into it... good job though u can be more careful with ur choice of words... keep writing...

Tamara Jay Hanaring said: hey Alen i read your poem..again it hapen and it just cheer me..it was sweet with vivid images and i say it will hasppen again and again..sweet lovely poem..

the story of every teenager your age.......the obvious feelings of love...u expressed it well......dont fret....love will come again....if not 2day..then 2morrow.... ur super amazing.....keep it up...

love is a lovely emotion...well written alen

Written with emotion...each line expresses your feeling well....good work

Your poem is good but why put the 'd' word. It's a bad word.

A wonderful verse well written.

i loved it it was good defiantly a 10, i know the feeling for this is exactly how i feel about my love,

wonderful. loved the question, 'is this actually love or affection? '

wow. nice poem. all of the words you chose was so perfect, because i felt the emotions that come through it.

awwwwwwwww! ! that was soooo beautiful! ! i absolutly loved it! ! fallin in love is a strong, powerful feeling...and the hardest thing to watch is for it all to slowly fade away...but like some say...it's better to have loved than lost...than to have never of loved at all...very good poem keep it up! ! ! ! :)

Love at first sight, usually gone mad.Its the most critical part in human life.to be in love, for the very first time.Nice writes Alen.

beautiful poem.....well expressed...........

It keeps happening all the time, I suppose that's what they call experience (of the Love kind) . Nicely summarised by Grace. Well written. You have described the feelings well.

''expect the unexpected''tha is if you fall inlove.,

oh thats poem is so beautiful..! ! ! ! ! ! ! @; - and yea good luck with this girl..! ^__^ DaNa...

Is this actually love or affection this case, how do i describe these were feelings i never had before they'll stay, but soon, she will go with time ..............beautifully drafted...voted tenner.

Well express good luck with this girl