Monday, January 22, 2018

Did I Love Him? Comments

Rating: 5.0

He loved me for my kind and gentle heart
Then he broke it
Tore it apart
Did i love him?
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susette varga
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Invisible One I Am Not Here 22 January 2018

Thanks Subhas... so appreciate you taking the time to read and rate it x

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 January 2018

Failure in one phase does not mean failure throughout. May be you should be ever ready to welcome any thing that reappears afresh. A live description of a painful phase of remorse and pain revealed well in this poem.Nicely crafted. 10 for it. Subhas

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