Friday, July 26, 2013

Did I Lose My Spark? Comments

Rating: 3.8

So long, it seems...
Years or eons, who am I to say?
Like the crackle of a static shock
Or the fizzing snap of a new lighter flint
...
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Peter Vector
COMMENTS
Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

A very well done poem, Peter. Thanks for sharing

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Amelia Patterson 11 August 2014

Love the imagery in the first stanza! Maybe the speaker is not solely to blame for the loss of spark? I think that the reaction is also an important part of it. Not that the spark was necessarily 'lost' but maybe the receiver lost what made them feel a spark. This is an awesome poem.: ]

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Hey...nice one! I like!

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Dave Walker 26 July 2013

A great poem, like it.

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