So long, it seems...
Years or eons, who am I to say?
Like the crackle of a static shock
Or the fizzing snap of a new lighter flint
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Love the imagery in the first stanza! Maybe the speaker is not solely to blame for the loss of spark? I think that the reaction is also an important part of it. Not that the spark was necessarily 'lost' but maybe the receiver lost what made them feel a spark. This is an awesome poem.: ]
A very well done poem, Peter. Thanks for sharing