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GOD, and nature have a way of balancing out.

like zoom of wind, finally never gone, but stay in our hand....you'll makes things possible in your poem....that always be remember... excellent that one has to read between each line to understand... the package in your mind...ha...ha....many got puzzled of what is fun and a command....God bless....a 10/10

this one is an enlightning poem

nice conceptual metaphor And hard time breaks our hearts nice philosophical poem 10

Hi i just loved the comparison its just so cute

You had fun with this piece well express....

A fine philosophical expression and good observation of nature without and within.

A good comparison with the nature and the broken love of human beings.

Yes, very matured one

hey i can't vote, but i gave you a 10 :)

very interseting take on this poem, i really liked the iventiveness(i don't think thats a real word :)) and emganasion on this poem, awesome poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

i think i agree on the comment of Yoonoos Peerbocus